GROUP 2:
Ladies,
Okay, we’ll need to do some re-shuffling of information. Your analysis of the play needs to delve deeper in detail and your examples need to be more closely related to the abuse of power evident in the play. How are we going to fix this? Firstly, be sure to take note of the points I have written below and secondly bombard me with the remaining questions one lunch hour.
- Mr Birling firing Eva: In your analysis, you need to focus on why it was an unfair dismissal. Your modern day examples are best kept to current examples of unfair dismissals and how power is often abused in the workforce. Do not try and join too many examples such as parental control over children and bullying in the school system-this makes things messy, keep to the abuse of power in the workforce, in particular unfair dismissals.
- Sheila “firing” Eva/Daisy: In here you should focus on how Eva used her social status and wealth to get Daisy fired. In your analysis make sure you explain so clearly how Sheila managed to do this. “So clearly,” means that you provide a number of examples so that the reader (viewer) has no reason to disagree with you at all. Your modern day examples should reflect how people use their social status to get their way in society by stepping on others. Provide specific examples.
- There is no analysis of the play evident in this section, therefore the modern day examples lack focus.
You have understood the language and interaction of the panel discussion well. Please come see me if my notes need clarification.
Take care,
Miss V
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